Truly Overpowered

my own review for my novel, not bad tho, like it add it to library!.

story is quite impressive and different but some subplots are quite cliche but it is interesting to read and entertaining let's see how it develops in the future

Since I am the first reader, I think the beginning is not bad.The world-building seems interesting.We haven't seen much of the characters yet, but Aletheia's interaction with the protagonist is a bit mysterious.Alright, I'd like to know when the release date is.And keep going~~

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

   "That is great let me see it." Alucard said. " Wait, this has a lot more stages, like what is foundation building stage! What is this?" he asked. [Young master, Foundation Building Realm is part of the natural cultivating process, however at some point in time people skipped this stage, because each stage took one year no matter the talent, and it was slowly forgotten about.] Alucard didn't ask anymore questions and started cultivating.

"Relax, your son will show them what it means to be a true genius."

      "You can't really blame him after all, due to his status, we already gave him a chamber that has a concentration of light energy double the normal standards, and I am guessing the Lord is also secretly boosting it, maybe it has already reached triple! How do you expect a child who just turned 12 to endure that?" Another priest commented.

"You can't do it?" her question made the three young generals furious.